

CollapseWalking. Slowly. Cold, thin air surrounds me. My eyes close, feet drag. I feel my heart quicken, then stop. I've collapse. I breathe deeply, in search for more air. Blood fills my lungs. I'm slowly, suffocating. Memories pass. Thoughts of my childhood, adolescence, adulthood, friends then family, slur by. I see a big red car, and a woman with wavy brown hair. I'm older, and i have my first love. We kiss. Now theres snow near me. Its my first blizzard, i'm cold. I move out. I'm floating on water. Sounds of waves crash by me. The heat of the sun pressing against my chest. I smile. My eyes open. I cough, then gag for air. Blood scouwers thCollapse
triumph

At lastWhen love couldnt answer the door, beauty did. when my heart failed, you gave me yours. now your dead, and gone, but i have you here with me always. So my smile is your beauty living on, and my heart is now our love.At last
Her...
Take care and have a good Christmas and New Year.
Andy
Take Care
Andy
feel free to chat to me on skype (if you have it). I'm always available for discussion or critique.
Nice work by the way, I look forward to seeing how this progresses. Do keep me posted on your progress.
Take Care and happy new year!
Andy
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