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Walking. Slowly. Cold, thin air surrounds me. My eyes close, feet drag.
I feel my heart quicken, then stop. I've collapse. I breathe deeply, in search for more air. Blood fills my lungs. I'm slowly, suffocating. Memories pass. Thoughts of my childhood, adolescence, adulthood, friends then family, slur by. I see a big red car, and a woman with wavy brown hair. I'm older, and i have my first love. We kiss. Now theres snow near me. Its my first blizzard, i'm cold. I move out. I'm floating on water. Sounds of waves crash by me. The heat of the sun pressing against my chest. I smile. My eyes open. I cough, then gag for air. Blood scouwers the dirt ridden concrete. Clenched fists grab my shirt and chest. I'm alone. Closed eyes. Adolescence, family, childhood, adulthood, friends. I'm dead. My frock coat remains sprawled against the ground. Hair waves in the cold thin air. Im ready to live. Goodbye.
©2009 ~Acevedo323
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no comment. it is what it is.... a speed poem mized with true feelings... those are the best in my opinion

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